Hello all!So, the WritingSnippetts podcast has posted a third installment of me taking on the first page of a couple more manuscripts. Am I mean? Honest? Egotistical? Imperial? As I say in the podcast, all of my comments are aimed at one goal -- getting writers published.
I found it ironic that at the end of the podcast, the voice-over says "No words were harmed in the making of this podcast." You be the judge! Personally, I was hoping that at least a couple of sentences that were harming the manuscript were killed off. :)
You can listen to the podcast here:
http://writingsnippets.wordpress.com/2011/07/25/ws-30-caleb-warnock-3-first-page-critique-part/
Oh, I like the use of imperial in your blog post. Kudos. To me, you will always be the Literary God-Like Instructor :)
ReplyDeleteOk. Maybe some words were actually harmed in this podcast. At least I know I killed all but the last line of my first paragraph you critiqued.
ReplyDeleteHee hee- Thanks Caleb, I am sorry I missed it, but it was fun to listen to. Good luck with your new book- it sounds fantastic. And thanks for being a guest.
ReplyDeleteLillian J. Banks
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